It does make sense, and actually, that was the effect I was trying to create, so you just made me squee! :^D I was hoping that by the end, readers would maybe even question the reality of everything that Eressetor had witnessed, feel the same foreboding as he does a little too.
But thanks so much for reading, and I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. It is really a turning point in the story.
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But thanks so much for reading, and I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. It is really a turning point in the story.