Oh, nicely done! Nerdanel's ride to Tirion is very surreal and apocalyptic, the perfect prelude to what is to come. There is balm in the ending...it reminds me of the scene in V for Vendetta when Evie says "God is in the rain." Good of you to take Feanor seriously - I have always thought he meant he would die of grief, which is a bit melodramatic. To hear him speaking as the smith who knows the secrets of the jewels is much more fitting.