Well, I think your children are perhaps not quite like human children, but then they really aren't; so that is a fine, Elvish touch.
For comparison you might want to read: Nightly Ritual. You will notice that you got lots of the action just right! Only the way your Elvish children observe and perceive the world is definitely not human, I think - but as I said, in this case, that is excellent!
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Well, I think your children are perhaps not quite like human children, but then they really aren't; so that is a fine, Elvish touch.
For comparison you might want to read: Nightly Ritual. You will notice that you got lots of the action just right! Only the way your Elvish children observe and perceive the world is definitely not human, I think - but as I said, in this case, that is excellent!