Both of these were gorgeous, but really, the "drabbunculus" was wonderful!

Because of the way you wrote the form, and within its restrictions, you managed to really pack a punch. Having to watch word count means every single word *counts*.

And you show,little by little, bit by bit, before it ever got to the "point of no return", the divisions, the memories, and the way in which families fell apart in a time like that.