Thank you! :) I'm not wholly satisfied with this chapter, but it's better than last week's travesty chapter. And I agree that it feels more like AMC.
Vingarie's family and the Telerin people have been really fun for me because I'm so used to the Noldor and their culture that I practically am one. (I'm sure you know what it's like to have Noldor poking their noses into every aspect of your life! ;^D) But anyway, my point was that the Teleri are a refreshing, fun change.
It must be kind of hard for Nelyo to watch this.
I'd imagine his feelings are really mixed right now: He wants his brother to be happy, but it only underscores his own unhappiness. I think that's why he ran away when he saw Macalaure and Vingarie in the square at Tirion.
And don't say anything like that either. (Though my little inner lover of tragedy tells me she adores that paragraph...)
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travestychapter. And I agree that it feels more like AMC.Vingarie's family and the Telerin people have been really fun for me because I'm so used to the Noldor and their culture that I practically am one. (I'm sure you know what it's like to have Noldor poking their noses into every aspect of your life! ;^D) But anyway, my point was that the Teleri are a refreshing, fun change.
It must be kind of hard for Nelyo to watch this.
I'd imagine his feelings are really mixed right now: He wants his brother to be happy, but it only underscores his own unhappiness. I think that's why he ran away when he saw Macalaure and Vingarie in the square at Tirion.
And don't say anything like that either. (Though my little inner lover of tragedy tells me she adores that paragraph...)
*cackles evolly* >:^))