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Dawn Felagund ([personal profile] dawn_felagund) wrote2006-02-08 03:00 pm
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To Review or Not to Review? That Is the Question....

Recently, I have been batting around the idea of submitting one of my short stories for archive review at HASA. So why is this a big deal? Just do it, right, Dawn?

The problem is that I have always made such a big loud noise about how I don't agree with processes that claim to judge what is "quality" fiction, something that is made even worse online, where even "blind" submissions are often easily recognized as belonging to a certain author and therefore prone (in my opinion) to greater bias than a review by true strangers.


For example, many of you have stories that I would know as yours the moment I read them or read the titles, even, in certain circumstances. I admit that I would find it hard to separate my feelings for you as a friend or an individual from my judgement of a story. And the opposite is unfortunately also true: I am sure that there are people in the Tolkien fanfic community who would decline one of my stories just because it was written by me. (None of these people, as far as I know, belong to HASA. If they do, they are not active over there.) And it's not hard to know what stories belong to me. Go to my "short story" tag and there's a list right there.

Besides that, I simply don't agree that even a huge pool of reviewers have a right to decide what is or is not quality. Now I've had it brought up to me before: But Dawn, you are an editor for a literary magazine. And you have been a fiction editor before and had the difficulty of actually choosing the "best" stories from a pool of submissions. Yes, but I see this as different. A literary magazine, to me, is nothing but a collection of pieces that the editor(s) find particularly good. It is the editor's opinions, certainly not a declaration of quality at large. Were you to read the same pool of stories as me, you would probably "rate" some differently than I do. And a literary magazine, also, includes a certain kind of fiction. A story from the genre of science fiction might be excellent to readers of science fiction, but I don't think that it would ever appear in The Praire Schooner. Not because it's bad but because they don't publish that kind of fiction.

But archives that require a "review" to get in on the premise of only wanting to accept fiction of "quality" are, in my opinion, assuming that a team of reviewers can make such a judgement. Even the most atrocious blue-haired, purple-irised, unicorn-riding "Mary Sue" would be good fiction to someone. On the other hand, a dense, psychologically-based story dealing with the Elven view of mortality might breeze into most archives...but there would be readers who would hate it. There are doubtlessly readers who hate my stories, who think that I'm long-winded, blathering, and--at times--pompous (they're certainly right on the first two counts...I'm not so sure that I can count as pompous, though), and I know there are people who love my stories. Who's right? Who's to same I write quality fiction...or not?

And so I've always assumed that I would avoid archives that "review" stories for inclusion. But recently, I want to give it a try, for a couple of reasons.

  1. I just want to see if it would be accepted. I'm curious. Curiosity may have killed the cat, but satisfaction brought him back.

  2. I can't help but feel that I am pompous or prideful to assume that I am making some kind of impact by witholding my work from certain archives. Like the staff of these archives are wringing their hands even as I type this and considering revising their admission guidelines solely because Dawn Felagund doesn't agree with them, and they are somehow incomplete if they don't get stories by Dawn Felagund posted there. Hmph.

  3. I want an audience for my work. And HASA is one of the most-read Tolkien archives, so to have my work there would be a good thing. (And eventually other "review" archives as well.)

  4. Am I really compromising my principles to submit my work? I do not do reviews, not because I'm lazy or I do not wish to help other authors get into archives but because a) I do not trust myself to be fair in reviewing the work of a friend or someone well known to me and b) I do not believe that I have any right to determine what is quality fiction. But to submit one's work...is that really in violation of my belief that the system is wrong? I also do not agree with using standardized tests for admission into universities, but I have taken both the SAT and GRE, scored well on both, and am proud of my work. It doesn't mean that I am agreeing that standardized tests are appropriate admissions standards. It is simply something that I had to do to achieve a greater goal: getting into the university I wanted to attend. A necessary evil, to borrow the cliche.


So that's where I stand. I'm interested in people's opinions on this.


But if you'd rather give me your opinion anonymously (and just because they're fun and I'm paying for the ability to use them), here's a poll:

[Poll #669291]

Now that it's 3 o'clock and I've done my blathering for the day, I will stop procrastinating and do some writing.

[identity profile] digdigil.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course you should do it, Dawn! You never know who is going to read it for review, and it could be people who will love it and accept it. No matter what happens, all the reviewers' advice will be helpful and extremely interesting to know.

[identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 08:36 pm (UTC)(link)
First of all Dawn should read an excellent essay about "How to Review" that a certain JunoMagic just posted and SSPed just about everywhere.

Contents:
1. The Reviewer's Job
2. How to Phrase a Review
3. How to Write a Review
4. The Author's Job

And then... what does it mean if a story passes HASA's review? Nothing much. It means that five to nine people liked it enough to click on "approve". That's all. It doesn't say so very much about the story's quality. The reviews at HASA are not intended to help the author, they are only meant to keep up a certain standard in the public archive. You may get valuable feedback, but that is not a certain prospect.

About the right of the reviewers to judge the quality of a story - well, they have as much a right to say "I think this is a good story, because (xyz)" as every other reader of your story.

re 2: I'm sorry if I have to destroy some illusions there... being part of HASA's staff... the admins care about keeping HASA running and a lively community... the reviews admins don't care about which story gets in and which doesn't get in so much as that people stay civilized about the whole process.

re 3: I have a comparison of three archive sites, FFNet, HASA and TFF. For my published short stories HASA gets me more hits than FFNet, for my long stories HASA and TFF are about the same and not really good. What's more is that I get almost no feedback from the public side. So while I do love HASA, I don't think you have to worry so much about getting published there or not.

re 4: HASA review cannot be compared to standardized admission tests. It's more like a poll. You ask at least nine people to read your story, and they say "Yes, I like it, because..." or they say "No, I don't like it, because...".

And at least HASA has no discriminating, prejudiced and biased submission guidelines like SoA and OSA. The process is anonymous, and if you don't run around telling all your friends "I have just submitted a story for review at HASA", it is unlikely that someone who knows your short story will review it. The reviewer pool is fairly large and you are not that well known in fandom that everyone will recognize your work at once.
And even if they do... do you really think that they are not able to say "I like this, because..." without lying?

I really don't understand what your psychological problem with reviewing is - you do beta-work, after all. In many ways that is also passing judgement over the quality of another person's story. You do that with every word of criticism.

And again - would the review by a robot be fairer? By a thing that does not know anything about life as a human being?

Sorry for the rant, but I'm rather involved in the problem of how to review at the moment!


[identity profile] digdigil.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 08:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I don't think it matters that you have spoken against cliquish behaviour in the past. The most important issue here is that if anyone wants to effect a change at HASA to include some 'new' writers, then the best place to start is for all the 'new' writers to start sending in their stuff. Beta'd, of course. And for all 'new' writers to review all the pending stories. Besides, I kind of like HASA's open kind of policy of having members do the reviewing. I still think it's one of the best sites around for fanfic writers to display their work. Didn't more of the problems occur with the awards people? I don't remember. BTW, Juno talked me into joining the HASA Welcome Team, so I have. They need a Welcome Manager and I didn't think I could do that because of my lack of knowledge of the technical stuff about computers, but I have become an assistant on the Welcoming Team.

[identity profile] callirhoe.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Would you like to hear a personal anecdote? :-P

In the distant past (or about two years ago, which is about the same in this digital age) I submitted something to HASA and was rejected, and I really felt crushed about it. I guess I was thinking that somehow my "worth" as a writer was dependent on my ability to write what other people wanted to read, something that would be accepted into the prestigious circles of Tolkien-fic. So then I promised myself that someday I would write something "good enough" to make it into that particular archive...

And earlier this year I finally did it, submitting one poem for review that had consistently been praised by reviewers -- even was nominated for a Mithril Award (*preens* ...because I am a very vain person :-P), and I thought, well, if anything of mine will ever make it in, this will be it.

So I submitted it, and waited anxiously for about a week, until I got the e-mail from HA: "Congratulations, your submission has been added to the archive," and so on. And the thing is, I was happy for a few hours, and then I didn't even care anymore. It just didn't matter to me that anyone thought that my work was worthy of being archived on the site, because that one poem was so uncharacteristic of me -- normally, my writing is a lot less popular than that one, and I approached writing it a different way than I approach most of my writings, because I wrote it for a challenge -- what other people wanted to read, not what I wanted to write. And what does that even mean, then, that it was approved for the archive? That I have succeeded in writing something that other people feel is an "addition to the genre" or a piece worthy of being included in the archive?

Don't get me wrong, I like HA. I like the people, I like the community feeling, I love the fact that so many people love it so much. But I've learned that these selective archives are tricky business, because it's not dependent on what is liked/disliked, but on what the reviewers feel is "worthy" to go into the archive. I'd rather stick with the Pit, write what I want to write, and take my chances on the tripe and the Sues, than have to tailor my writing to what I think has a good chance of being accepted into the archive.

Bleh, now I just sound pompous and self-aggrandizing. Really I'm not -- I hope -- but I just don't feel that it proves anything to get accepted into HASA.

That said -- go for it! It is still a bit of a rush, knowing that you have been accepted into one of the more prestigious Tolkien archives, and when a review comes back negative, I find that they have some really great comments as to the precise reason *why* they didn't want to accept it into the archive, and how it can be improved. :-)

[identity profile] isil-elensar.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I've yet to submit anything for the public side of HASA. I've been rather content to leave my drabbles (that's all I have there now) on the member's side. *shrug*

I'm sorely tempted to start pulling things down again. I know I can't please everyone with what I write, but what's bad is when a friend I had the support of through most of a relatively short writing career decides to start questioning my work. The angry part of me could get petty and start questioning hers... but I'm not. I'd rather just pull it down and save the ONE nice review I did get.

Sorry to rant here. Some things I just can't understand...

[identity profile] digdigil.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, then, so to answer your question, "Am I hypocritical?" then yes, you are. But not as a person, only on this issue. But who cares? Like you replied to Juno, refusing to take a standardized admissions test for Uni is only going to hurt you, and refusing to submit a story to HASA is only going to deprive you of possibly getting a story accepted to one of the best sites around. I admire your opinion that no one has the right to judge the quality of another writer's beta'd piece of fanfiction, but that is HASA's policy, and if you want to submit there, then you have to go through their submission process.

Now Dawn, do you know how I bad I felt telling you that on that point I agreed that you were being hypocritical? *SOB* But I did it only because you asked, and I couldn't find any way around it unless I wanted to be your boot-licking sycophant. And I really don't care if it is hypocritical or not. Just go and submit your story there anyway. Sometimes we just have to choke back our bile and do things we don't agree with but that we know will be good for us in the long run. (And I love you so much Dawn, and I'm sorry!)

[identity profile] mirien.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you should, Dawn. The HASA review system has its flaws but at the end of the day, it does help to maintain a very high standard. I have stuff there I submitted aeons ago before I decided I realised it was less important to me to have my work published there. But now you've brought it up, I may go back, just to see if they would take some of the slash stuff.

What I will say though is yes, the HASA system does make for site with (largely) a very high standard, but it is also, as I know you know, not the be all and end all. Getting rejected in no way means the story isn't good or worthy of HASA, it just means the 9 reviewers who got to it first overall chose to reject it. In that sense it is very random and very much a game of chance. I mention that because I know how as writers, rejection can be tough to handle, no matter how level headed we are, these are our babies - both the Elves and the work they are in!

All that said, go for it! I may go and reinstall my reviewing privileges!

[identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
*sigh*

As I understand it the reviews process at HASA is meant to insure nothing more and nothing less that 5 to 9 readers say "Yes, I like this story, because...".

It's not an absolute judgement of quality and no admin at HASA will say that it is. It's more like, if nine average readers are willing to give you in writing that they don't like this story, because... then that is an indication that it's not what people who come to HASA want to read there.

I think you have a problem with the attitudes of people who review. In a way I think that's strange, because you say you have no personal experience with reviews at HASA. You are not reviewing at HASA and you have never submitted a story for review at HASA. So... I think it's a bit unfair to single the reviewers at HASA out and assume that they are people who believe that they can pass judgement about submitted stories as if they were "an absolute truth".

I am one of those reviewers. A couple of other people on your flist are or have been reviewers there, too.

I am saying that I do not think that quality can be based off of anyone's opinion, human, robot, monkey, or Elf.

On what can quality be based in your opinion?

Other archives: certain genres may not be submitted at all, such as "Tenth Walker", "girl falls into Middle-earth", "slash"; OCs may only be submitted if they are not "Mary Sues". It is not clear who gets to decide if a story is accepted for those archives, how many people are involved in that decision and on which guidelines this decision is based.

I don't like that. It's not fair.

[identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I'd rather stick with the Pit, write what I want to write, and take my chances on the tripe and the Sues, than have to tailor my writing to what I think has a good chance of being accepted into the archive.


I'm totally with you. The management of the Pit is shit, but it's as free as fanfiction can get online at the moment. I value that freedom so much that I can overlook the management problems!

[identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
All that said, go for it! I may go and reinstall my reviewing privileges!


Please do so. I think that the standards of the HASA system are based actually on something like "poll" among readers. If 5 to 9 readers are willing to take the time to say "I like this story, because..." then it certainly deserves to be showcased in the public archive. If 5 to 9 readers are willing to take the time and the trouble to say "I don't like this, because...", then that does not mean the story is bad, but maybe not quite what the majority of readers would like to see *showcased* on the public side of HASA.

The catch is that this poll will be fairer if the reviewer pool is larger and more mixed. If you have a very large pool of active reviewers with many different preferences, each submitted story has a better chance to get really a judgement by "the average reader" and not by a dedicated minority that may have developed prejudices and blind spots with the passage of time.

*sigh*

[identity profile] isil-elensar.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 09:50 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome to rant any time you'd like. ;)

Thanks. I try to keep it to a minimum, but sometimes I just can't help it. Actually, I've been ranting a lot lately. Maybe the stress I've been under the last couple months is *finally* beginning to get to me. I hate that. I really need a vacation soon.

I still fangurl you, for what it's worth. I wish I had more time to keep up with your writing. I was in love with your Celeborn story and haven't even had time to keep up. *hangs head*

*hugs* Thank you, Dawn. I appreciate it a lot. And don't worry about the Celeborn fic. It's not going anywhere at the moment anyway, so when you get the chance to catch up, just run on over to my lj. Apparently Cel and Roselinde have gone on vacation with Thranduil and Eden, but at least I still have Elladan and Cassandra to play with, so I've not been left alone entirely. AND I got those two SWG challenges to get done as well. ;-)

[identity profile] frenchpony.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I have forty-five minutes before I must present myself in the gamelan room. That's time for one long, considered reply, and you're it. Congratulations, for what it's worth.

I personally have quite a few objections to HASA, besides the fact that you need to show them your e-mail to get in, and I'm not willing to do that. HASA strikes me as the University of Michigan of fanfiction archives -- it produces roughly equal parts stellar work and tsuris. Just as the University of Michigan, although nationally recognized as an excellent school, finds itself embroiled in very loud public battles over affirmative action and reports from current students that the administration makes it almost impossible to get out of that school, HASA causes lots of people to worry, angst, bite their fingernails, get into long, bitter online arguments with each other. . . over what? Fanfiction?

HASA certainly sets itself up as The Best Of The Best, and they do have some basis for that claim. Probably ninety percent of what they post there is good, if somewhat repetitive in style. On the other hand, there are equally good archives out there. Stories of Arda is my personal favorite (it's now my primary archive), and it's well worth checking out. SoA doesn't set itself up to be the be-all and end-all of Tolkien fandom, the site owner is a very nice lady with endless reams of patience and a real commitment to making sure everyone has a good time. So, is HASA in some way "better" than SoA? I don't know. It doesn't have the reputation, certainly. But it also doesn't have either the hubris or the tsuris* that seems to follow HASA wherever it goes.

I guess I'd tell you this: If the fact of having a short story up at HASA will make you happy, go for it. Submit a story, see what happens. But don't hang your entire self-esteem on it. It's really not worth it, and there are other, perfectly good places out there. When all is said and done, this is just a game that we play. It's not worth getting yourself terribly worked up over a game.




*Look at me! Greek and Yiddish in the same sentence!

[identity profile] tarion-anarore.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure I'm in a position to say "yes, definitely" or "hell no!", seeing as none of my stuff is posted at any archive, only on LJ, with the exception of one challenge entry at HASA.

*shrug*

Wow, I'm sure that was very helpful! :P
But, if you decide to, (like I said), you could pick any story. I like them all!!

[identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
see a difference between quality in my opinion and quality in general.

Ummm.

But the system is not based on "quality in general" or the assumption that there is something like "the absolute standard of quality in fanfiction".

Actually, the system is based exactly on what you mention: It is based on quality according to the opinion of each individual reviewer, with the final decision relying on the principle of majority.

There's no perfect system, and in my opinion there is no such thing as "objective quality" of any kind. But I do value the random 5 to 9 individual decisions of average readers, based on their individual opinions of quality.

People complain about wrong or right decisions... I guess when it comes down to it, there are no right or wrong decisions there, just as there's no "objective or absolute quality". But the majority of members at HASA does want a public archive that is not open for general posting. If that is what the majority wants, it seems to me that a polled decision based on the individual opinions of random readers is a pretty valid and fair way of arriving at such a decision.

Personally I definitely prefer open posting to all those different submission procedures. Allow people to write and post what they want within the limits of the law.

Here's to FFNet!!!!

[identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com 2006-02-08 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
There have been *people* trying to make it about some kind of "general and absolute quality".

The canatics and fanonatics love to claim that they are able to judge if a story has this kind of quality. And HASA has (had) its share of such members. There are reasons why there are prejudices against HASA and negative opinions about HASA.

But... I think if I analyze the system as objectively as I can, sort of slipping into my political analyst mode, then I don't find the claim of general/absolute/universal quality wired into the system. It's rather an attempt to prevent a single person or a clique to completely taking over submissions procedures. The system is, of course, less than perfect... if people vote yes, just because they recognize a story, if people vote just because their friends told them to, if the reviewer pool is so small that only canatics and fanonatics review (who do indeed believe that they are upholding TEH absolute quality)... *sigh* no man made system is perfect. But for a system without open posting, HASA's approach is not that bad, because it does rely on the individual opinion of quality of nine random readers.

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