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Recently, I have been batting around the idea of submitting one of my short stories for archive review at HASA. So why is this a big deal? Just do it, right, Dawn?

The problem is that I have always made such a big loud noise about how I don't agree with processes that claim to judge what is "quality" fiction, something that is made even worse online, where even "blind" submissions are often easily recognized as belonging to a certain author and therefore prone (in my opinion) to greater bias than a review by true strangers.


For example, many of you have stories that I would know as yours the moment I read them or read the titles, even, in certain circumstances. I admit that I would find it hard to separate my feelings for you as a friend or an individual from my judgement of a story. And the opposite is unfortunately also true: I am sure that there are people in the Tolkien fanfic community who would decline one of my stories just because it was written by me. (None of these people, as far as I know, belong to HASA. If they do, they are not active over there.) And it's not hard to know what stories belong to me. Go to my "short story" tag and there's a list right there.

Besides that, I simply don't agree that even a huge pool of reviewers have a right to decide what is or is not quality. Now I've had it brought up to me before: But Dawn, you are an editor for a literary magazine. And you have been a fiction editor before and had the difficulty of actually choosing the "best" stories from a pool of submissions. Yes, but I see this as different. A literary magazine, to me, is nothing but a collection of pieces that the editor(s) find particularly good. It is the editor's opinions, certainly not a declaration of quality at large. Were you to read the same pool of stories as me, you would probably "rate" some differently than I do. And a literary magazine, also, includes a certain kind of fiction. A story from the genre of science fiction might be excellent to readers of science fiction, but I don't think that it would ever appear in The Praire Schooner. Not because it's bad but because they don't publish that kind of fiction.

But archives that require a "review" to get in on the premise of only wanting to accept fiction of "quality" are, in my opinion, assuming that a team of reviewers can make such a judgement. Even the most atrocious blue-haired, purple-irised, unicorn-riding "Mary Sue" would be good fiction to someone. On the other hand, a dense, psychologically-based story dealing with the Elven view of mortality might breeze into most archives...but there would be readers who would hate it. There are doubtlessly readers who hate my stories, who think that I'm long-winded, blathering, and--at times--pompous (they're certainly right on the first two counts...I'm not so sure that I can count as pompous, though), and I know there are people who love my stories. Who's right? Who's to same I write quality fiction...or not?

And so I've always assumed that I would avoid archives that "review" stories for inclusion. But recently, I want to give it a try, for a couple of reasons.

  1. I just want to see if it would be accepted. I'm curious. Curiosity may have killed the cat, but satisfaction brought him back.

  2. I can't help but feel that I am pompous or prideful to assume that I am making some kind of impact by witholding my work from certain archives. Like the staff of these archives are wringing their hands even as I type this and considering revising their admission guidelines solely because Dawn Felagund doesn't agree with them, and they are somehow incomplete if they don't get stories by Dawn Felagund posted there. Hmph.

  3. I want an audience for my work. And HASA is one of the most-read Tolkien archives, so to have my work there would be a good thing. (And eventually other "review" archives as well.)

  4. Am I really compromising my principles to submit my work? I do not do reviews, not because I'm lazy or I do not wish to help other authors get into archives but because a) I do not trust myself to be fair in reviewing the work of a friend or someone well known to me and b) I do not believe that I have any right to determine what is quality fiction. But to submit one's work...is that really in violation of my belief that the system is wrong? I also do not agree with using standardized tests for admission into universities, but I have taken both the SAT and GRE, scored well on both, and am proud of my work. It doesn't mean that I am agreeing that standardized tests are appropriate admissions standards. It is simply something that I had to do to achieve a greater goal: getting into the university I wanted to attend. A necessary evil, to borrow the cliche.


So that's where I stand. I'm interested in people's opinions on this.


But if you'd rather give me your opinion anonymously (and just because they're fun and I'm paying for the ability to use them), here's a poll:

[Poll #669291]

Now that it's 3 o'clock and I've done my blathering for the day, I will stop procrastinating and do some writing.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-08 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com
First of all Dawn should read an excellent essay about "How to Review" that a certain JunoMagic just posted and SSPed just about everywhere.

Contents:
1. The Reviewer's Job
2. How to Phrase a Review
3. How to Write a Review
4. The Author's Job

And then... what does it mean if a story passes HASA's review? Nothing much. It means that five to nine people liked it enough to click on "approve". That's all. It doesn't say so very much about the story's quality. The reviews at HASA are not intended to help the author, they are only meant to keep up a certain standard in the public archive. You may get valuable feedback, but that is not a certain prospect.

About the right of the reviewers to judge the quality of a story - well, they have as much a right to say "I think this is a good story, because (xyz)" as every other reader of your story.

re 2: I'm sorry if I have to destroy some illusions there... being part of HASA's staff... the admins care about keeping HASA running and a lively community... the reviews admins don't care about which story gets in and which doesn't get in so much as that people stay civilized about the whole process.

re 3: I have a comparison of three archive sites, FFNet, HASA and TFF. For my published short stories HASA gets me more hits than FFNet, for my long stories HASA and TFF are about the same and not really good. What's more is that I get almost no feedback from the public side. So while I do love HASA, I don't think you have to worry so much about getting published there or not.

re 4: HASA review cannot be compared to standardized admission tests. It's more like a poll. You ask at least nine people to read your story, and they say "Yes, I like it, because..." or they say "No, I don't like it, because...".

And at least HASA has no discriminating, prejudiced and biased submission guidelines like SoA and OSA. The process is anonymous, and if you don't run around telling all your friends "I have just submitted a story for review at HASA", it is unlikely that someone who knows your short story will review it. The reviewer pool is fairly large and you are not that well known in fandom that everyone will recognize your work at once.
And even if they do... do you really think that they are not able to say "I like this, because..." without lying?

I really don't understand what your psychological problem with reviewing is - you do beta-work, after all. In many ways that is also passing judgement over the quality of another person's story. You do that with every word of criticism.

And again - would the review by a robot be fairer? By a thing that does not know anything about life as a human being?

Sorry for the rant, but I'm rather involved in the problem of how to review at the moment!


(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-08 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com
*sigh*

As I understand it the reviews process at HASA is meant to insure nothing more and nothing less that 5 to 9 readers say "Yes, I like this story, because...".

It's not an absolute judgement of quality and no admin at HASA will say that it is. It's more like, if nine average readers are willing to give you in writing that they don't like this story, because... then that is an indication that it's not what people who come to HASA want to read there.

I think you have a problem with the attitudes of people who review. In a way I think that's strange, because you say you have no personal experience with reviews at HASA. You are not reviewing at HASA and you have never submitted a story for review at HASA. So... I think it's a bit unfair to single the reviewers at HASA out and assume that they are people who believe that they can pass judgement about submitted stories as if they were "an absolute truth".

I am one of those reviewers. A couple of other people on your flist are or have been reviewers there, too.

I am saying that I do not think that quality can be based off of anyone's opinion, human, robot, monkey, or Elf.

On what can quality be based in your opinion?

Other archives: certain genres may not be submitted at all, such as "Tenth Walker", "girl falls into Middle-earth", "slash"; OCs may only be submitted if they are not "Mary Sues". It is not clear who gets to decide if a story is accepted for those archives, how many people are involved in that decision and on which guidelines this decision is based.

I don't like that. It's not fair.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-08 11:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com
see a difference between quality in my opinion and quality in general.

Ummm.

But the system is not based on "quality in general" or the assumption that there is something like "the absolute standard of quality in fanfiction".

Actually, the system is based exactly on what you mention: It is based on quality according to the opinion of each individual reviewer, with the final decision relying on the principle of majority.

There's no perfect system, and in my opinion there is no such thing as "objective quality" of any kind. But I do value the random 5 to 9 individual decisions of average readers, based on their individual opinions of quality.

People complain about wrong or right decisions... I guess when it comes down to it, there are no right or wrong decisions there, just as there's no "objective or absolute quality". But the majority of members at HASA does want a public archive that is not open for general posting. If that is what the majority wants, it seems to me that a polled decision based on the individual opinions of random readers is a pretty valid and fair way of arriving at such a decision.

Personally I definitely prefer open posting to all those different submission procedures. Allow people to write and post what they want within the limits of the law.

Here's to FFNet!!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-09 12:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ssotknapsack.livejournal.com
*Warning: Not a fan fiction girl*

I would take issue with the small sample size, and I think this is--to some extent--where Dawn is going with her HASA-issues. 5 or 9 people isn't a whole lot in determining an on/off scenario of any kind. It's like me calling up 5 random people and asking their opinion on same-sex marriage. Extrapolated across 350 million (the population of the US), those 5 people probably wouldn't be representative of "average everybodys" out there. What if my "random" cold calling got me 5 people in Texas? That's a mathematical possibility, but I'd hope the opinions of Texans aren't representative of the entire US population.

Now I suppose if your story is really good and really mainstream, 5 approvals wouldn't be a problem. But then there are also 5 people who probably wouldn't "get" an experimental piece, good or not. That doesn't mean it's not good; it just means that the first, random 5 people to stumble across it and make judgments for an entire community didn't like it.

That's tough, IMHO.

Sorry to kick up a debate with someone I barely know. *Hiding*

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-09 08:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com
Oh, more people would definitely be better, but the site is not that big. 500 active members and I think not even half of them are active reviewers. You'd never get a story accepted in a reasonable period of time.

About what gets accepted... I've been a volunteer there for more than a year now, and I have seen just about everything accepted. It would work better if more people were willing to review, if the reviewer pool would really mirror the opinions of all members. *sigh*

All in all I think if a site doesn't allow open posting, it's fairer than having the site owner and her friends decide on a whim... because if someone happens not to get along with that clique, she'll have a hard time to get in no matter how wonderful her writing is.

I know why I definitely prefer completely open sites.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-09 09:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com
Which I don't think is a judgement that can be made by a group of nine...or a group of any size.

But if the members of an archive site don't want to allow open posting, who will be able to decide?

I don't think that a group consisting of the site owner and maybe a few friends will be fair in the long run, no matter how good their intentions are. Cliquish behaviour is kind of inevitable that way.

Phrasing of stuff at HASA - well, it's writing. There's no perfect writing and God knows a lot of the stuff at HASA could do with some rephrasing. Why don't you post some of your ideas in the suggestions forum? If all the good ideas and constructive criticism remains outside HASA forever, nothing is going to change. And you are a part of that community, after all. :-)

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-11 06:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rhapsody11.livejournal.com
And at least HASA has no discriminating, prejudiced and biased submission guidelines like SoA and OSA.

*blinks* On what are you basing this?

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-11 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com
On the submission guidelines?

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-12 10:17 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rhapsody11.livejournal.com
Nice try. I would like to know where the "discriminating, prejudiced and biased" comes from.

I am a reviewer at HASA, OSA and SOA in case you are wondering and I have been working together with people from these archives for the MEFA's in a very pleasant and fruitful manner (which gave me a good feeling to see people from all archives unite for this cause), but this is the first time I see someone tearing down sister archives like this. So yet again, why do you say this? If you cannot identify with OSA and SOA, that's ok, I can understand (each to their own right?), but I am a proud member of OSA and SOA and it feels like you pass on the same judgement to me (and all the members of those archives) because I do submit my work there and review there and participate there.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-12 10:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com
Let me rephrase: I don't like OSA and SoA because *I* believe that their submission guidelines are discriminating, prejudiced and biased.

That is my own personal opinion about the guidelines those archives are operating with, and it has nothing to do with the authors and reviewers at those archives.

I am happy for everyone who feels at home there and enjoys those archives. I am very sorry that you feel I'm passing judgement on you. That was never my intention. I don't know you and I am sure that every author and reviewer at those archives is doing her best to make them a friendly and creative community (after all that's what fanfic archives are about, right?). Many of my friends archive their stories at OSA and SoA, therefore I know and respect that many authors are very happy there and that many wonderful stories are archived there.

But that doesn't change that I think that the guidelines of both archives, or to be exact certain aspects of those guidelines restrict the freedom of writing.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-12 10:54 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rhapsody11.livejournal.com
But that doesn't change that I think that the guidelines of both archives, or to be exact certain aspects of those guidelines restrict the freedom of writing.

Whenever you decide to write fan fic, there is an immediate restriction because you choose to write within a certain world. In order to stay true to that world and the creator of that world, there will always be restrictions if it was not only out of respect for the said author/creator.

Both SoA and OSA, are not discriminating and so on in their submission guidelines (actually with a broad concensus of all participants, the almost same set of rules were accepted for an archive I am an admin for), simply because they respect Tolkien and his creations. OSA is an adult het fic archive and operates regarding a philosophy, SoA is more a family friendly archive where the rating goes up 'till R. But both are created with an idea, mission, based on that submission guidelines (and I believe for recent changes, members were consulted (at least at OSA I believe), so that does reflect the wishes of the fans.

If you want true freedom in writing and creativity: write original fiction, because claiming that you can find that in writing fan fic and wanting it to combine with paying outmost respect for the creator of a fandom is just an illusion. You can't have both.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-12 11:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com
I guess we'll just have to agree to disagree.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-12 11:22 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rhapsody11.livejournal.com
np :) life would get too boring if we all agree with another and sang the same song.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-12 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juno-magic.livejournal.com
For example:

OSA:

MARY SUES AND ORIGINAL CHARACTERS (OCs)

* The OC should not interfere with the canon characters' basic personalities. (i.e. the canon characters should not go OOC (Out Of Character) simply because of the original character's presence.) For example, do not have Boromir (or anyone else) turn into an evil rapist just because the OC is so damn irresistible.
* The OC should not dominate the fan fic to the extent that all other characters and Middle-earth become non-existent.
* The OC should have plausible powers and attributes. There must be good canonical explanations for any powers/hair colour/traits that your OC has.
* The OC must have a solid background. That's not to say you have to spend an eternity describing the OCs childhood - however, the OCs background information (i.e. name, race, family, appearance) should fit in with Middle-earth. Do not invent new family members of existing characters unless the canon is vague on their ancestry. Extensive family trees can be found in the Appendices of RotK as well as The Silmarillion.
* The OC should be realistic and have depth to his/her character. An OC that is too perfect, or has too many powers is not believable and not fun to read about.
* OCs should not cause plot holes. Whatever adventure they get embroiled in - make it reasonable. Why would the fellowship want this 12-year-old girl to join them?
* While it is interesting to have an OC with a detailed background, please try to limit the device of having her abused, raped, sold into slavery, etc. Not only have these been done to death but after a time strains credibility when an OC is subjected to so much abuse and then rises to the occasion instead of being a gibbering wreck.
* Modern Age OCs - If the OC should originate from a universe other than Middle Earth, she will enter Middle Earth with no prior knowledge of it. In other words, no character is going to enter Middle Earth with knowledge of THE TRILOGY. Open Scrolls strives for quality and this reeks of nothing but LAZY PLOTTING. The OC should not be able to speak the language instantly unless there is a very good reason for it. Westron is NOT English. If the OC HAS to join the Fellowship, please provide a reasonable explanation for it. Elrond has been a leader for a very long time, it's going to be a compelling reason that convinces him why an unattached female, with no wilderness skills, who doesn't speak the language, should accompany nine males into the most dangerous place in Middle Earth.


SoA:

# Modern character insertion - Modern day people fall into Middle-Earth
# Mary-Sue's - OFC's, even in romances with canon characters, are not automatically Mary-Sue's. But if she joins the Fellowship or requires you to seriously violate canon, steals lines from canon characters or changes the course of the story.....she is more than likely a Mary Sue. No Mary Sue parodies either, please.


SoA's guidelines are much better than OSA's, in some respects better than HASA's, because they are friendlier in tone. However, I am seriously put off by the long list of what you may not submit there.

I agree - of course - that it is the right of the site owner to ban as many genres for whatever reason from their site.

Nevertheless I think that it is discriminating to exclude so many sub-genres of fanfiction, and it seems to me that this is the consequence of a mindset prejudiced and biased against those sub-genres.

Once more, that is only my own personal opinion about the guidelines that those archives are based on.

It is an opinion that has nothing at all to do with the authors and reviewers at those archives.

As I already said, many of my friends post their stories there, and probably review there, too, and I am very happy if they are happy there.

So please accept my apology if my opinion has offended you.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-12 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ann-arien.livejournal.com
Er... I don't mean to trash OSA because I've read some amazing stories there and I'm sure the people are great, too.

But reading the submission guidelines about OFCs I have to say that, between the lines, what they really mean is "No OFC please!" I mean, they narrow the possibilities so much that it's almost impossible for someone unwilling to spend an eternity creating a perfectly plausible OFC, only to have her blend in the background. Isn't the point of creating an OFC in fanfic having fun and adding something new to the canon?

And then, after all these restrictions, they tell you that it's a non-slash archive, too. While I understand that not everyone is open to the idea of M/M pairings, what else are you supposed to do is inserting some new character is well-nigh impossible.

Again, this is only my opinion, and I do not wish to insult anyone by expressing it.

(no subject)

Date: 2006-02-13 09:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] rhapsody11.livejournal.com
But reading the submission guidelines about OFCs I have to say that, between the lines, what they really mean is "No OFC please!"

Well than you are very easily discouraged or very negative. They encourage yout to come up with a decent written OC and you really have to take it very negatively to become this discouraged. Many of the, award winning, stories are based on a well explored OFC or OMC and are hosted there, so your assumption that they wanna scream "NO OFC" is very incorrect. I know Nilmandra of SoA though feels very strongly about the whole OC issue, so you are blaming the wrong archive here.

As for slash, I don't mind, as long if it fits to the canon of the said fandom. Since Tolkien never wrote slash, to me it shouldn't belong in the Tolkien fandom, but for Buffy, Will & Grace ect ect.

what else are you supposed to do is inserting some new character is well-nigh impossible.

Become creative, strong character and plot building. Which is tons of fun.

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