Poor Erestor - he's doomed. I'm just trying to figure out if the wicked Telvo is setting him up for himself, or his lonely dad.
*evil cackle* Ah...how do you solve a problem like Telvo? :^P Long stories tend for me to have events or characters that surprise me and do something I never would have expected, and Telvo was that character in this story. The Telvo side-story kind of came from nothing and ended up being one of my favorite aspects of this chapter. All because he answered the door back in chapter two, and I thought, "Hey, this guy seems interesting!" :^P
I have come to the conclusion that this is not the type of story meant to be read in installments. It's immensely frustrating!
*another evil cackle* Yes, I am evol in this. It's mostly because when I try to revise long stories all at once, they just don't get done. So I do a chapter a week and it's palatable.
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Date: 2006-08-04 10:55 pm (UTC)*evil cackle* Ah...how do you solve a problem like Telvo? :^P Long stories tend for me to have events or characters that surprise me and do something I never would have expected, and Telvo was that character in this story. The Telvo side-story kind of came from nothing and ended up being one of my favorite aspects of this chapter. All because he answered the door back in chapter two, and I thought, "Hey, this guy seems interesting!" :^P
I have come to the conclusion that this is not the type of story meant to be read in installments. It's immensely frustrating!
*another evil cackle* Yes, I am evol in this. It's mostly because when I try to revise long stories all at once, they just don't get done. So I do a chapter a week and it's palatable.
And I'm evol and like to torment you all. >:^))