I remember I gasped when I first read this chapter. There is so much emotion in it--raw emotion! And the testosterone flowing off of Fëanor just overwhelmed me. Eressetor's description of himself broke my heart. Because I know he is nothing like the hideous being he pictures himself to be. "Horn-yellow toenails"! LOL!
And it was very, very hott. VERY hott! I thought, "Wow, Dawn! Lucky Alina! You can write me a sexy story like this anytime!" But no, really. It's not only about the sex, is it? For me, it was all about the other, practically forgotten people who surround the Fëanorions and support them totally.
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Date: 2006-09-14 11:18 pm (UTC)And it was very, very hott. VERY hott! I thought, "Wow, Dawn! Lucky Alina! You can write me a sexy story like this anytime!" But no, really. It's not only about the sex, is it? For me, it was all about the other, practically forgotten people who surround the Fëanorions and support them totally.
Great story, Dawn. Great chapter. Great job!