I'm pleased that the tone you noticed is coming through. When I was writing this, I thought at times to myself, "Foil of AMC." I wanted the tone to be dark and depressing and wanted the family to be caught in a perpetual state of disarray. They are falling apart. What will it take to bring them back together?
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
rosecarmine
(no subject)
Date: 2006-09-27 12:18 am (UTC)I'm pleased that the tone you noticed is coming through. When I was writing this, I thought at times to myself, "Foil of AMC." I wanted the tone to be dark and depressing and wanted the family to be caught in a perpetual state of disarray. They are falling apart. What will it take to bring them back together?
Two more chapters and you'll find out. ;)