I'm glad that this worked because I had feared that it might be a little "gimmicky." Like making the sense of time confusing was me trying to be profound. (I see writers doing this all the time, and it's one of the few things that truly tends to annoy me.) But I did want Macalaure to come across as a little...erm...crazy. Surviving only through the memories of his past and his loved ones, all of whom are now departed in one way or another.
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Date: 2007-01-04 03:23 am (UTC)