Irriation just reads like a nightmare and I just love this bit: the Light save the Light!
Call it foreshadowing, but I wonder if Fëanor realised at that moment as well that he would become the light or beacon to turn to in the dark times ahead. I also like the technique and the flow in that piece: very unique!
And oh Tyelko, his way of cleaning made me smile. How unfair that when there is finally beautiful weather outside and you have to clean... with his own flair LOL!
Fëanor and wee!Nelyo, ow Dawn, that was so cute. It read as if it was a RL moment for me. Working on a piece, but suddenly you feel the soft warmth of your kid, wanting to be with you... Thanks for that!
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Date: 2007-08-19 10:43 pm (UTC)the Light save the Light!
Call it foreshadowing, but I wonder if Fëanor realised at that moment as well that he would become the light or beacon to turn to in the dark times ahead. I also like the technique and the flow in that piece: very unique!
And oh Tyelko, his way of cleaning made me smile. How unfair that when there is finally beautiful weather outside and you have to clean... with his own flair LOL!
Fëanor and wee!Nelyo, ow Dawn, that was so cute. It read as if it was a RL moment for me. Working on a piece, but suddenly you feel the soft warmth of your kid, wanting to be with you... Thanks for that!