Well, it's that special day of the week...posting Friday!
I'm going to keep it short for once: We're still in Tyelkormo's point of view. We're still in Formenos.
Warnings for the chapter: Nelyo!gropage. Again. The boy can't keep his hands to himself. Also, Tyelko mentions "spawning." Yes, really, if you thought I was kidding in the Ask My Characters a Question Meme when I said that Tyelko learned about sex through spawning, I was not. Oh, and there is a really bad song. Apparently, Nelyo and Macalaure like to get drunk and write bad songs. Unfortunately, I was entirely sober when I wrote it, so I have no excuse.
Macalaure is still injured in this chapter (since he hurt himself less than a week ago). It is my personal thought that I kind of neglected it, but it becomes an issue in the *next* chapter, and so I am well aware that when I hunker down for Hardcore Revision™, I am going to have to add a bit more about that in this chapter. Just as reminders.
Okay, that's all. Not as short as I wanted it to be, but okay. As usual: Comments, suggestions, and criticisms are all welcomed, both signed and anonymous. And thank you for reading :)
( Chapter Fifteen )
I'm going to keep it short for once: We're still in Tyelkormo's point of view. We're still in Formenos.
Warnings for the chapter: Nelyo!gropage. Again. The boy can't keep his hands to himself. Also, Tyelko mentions "spawning." Yes, really, if you thought I was kidding in the Ask My Characters a Question Meme when I said that Tyelko learned about sex through spawning, I was not. Oh, and there is a really bad song. Apparently, Nelyo and Macalaure like to get drunk and write bad songs. Unfortunately, I was entirely sober when I wrote it, so I have no excuse.
Macalaure is still injured in this chapter (since he hurt himself less than a week ago). It is my personal thought that I kind of neglected it, but it becomes an issue in the *next* chapter, and so I am well aware that when I hunker down for Hardcore Revision™, I am going to have to add a bit more about that in this chapter. Just as reminders.
Okay, that's all. Not as short as I wanted it to be, but okay. As usual: Comments, suggestions, and criticisms are all welcomed, both signed and anonymous. And thank you for reading :)
( Chapter Fifteen )
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