In chapter thirty-five, Macalaure has an unfortunate incident with Nelyo and one of his...*ahem*...interests, that leaves him rather POed with his brother, made worse by spending a night in the rain and having a vivid nightmare alluding to Nelyo's later handlessness. In this chapter, the brothers reconcile a bit and make their way to the sea, but not before finding themselves in the the usual excitement, getting a bit drunk, and Nelyo having a rather uncharacteristic outburst as a result.
The boys discuss orcish-type things in this chapter, so if you're bothered by gruesome topics, please be forewarned and proceed carefully. Other than that, I think that they more or less behave in this chapter.
Per usual, all comments--good and bad--are welcome and appreciated. Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to give me comments and help with this story. I'm a bit amazed to be in chapter thirty-six already; it seems just yesterday, I was nervously posting chapter one. Yesterday, while working on editing the next week's worth of chapters, I moved from my second disk of material and onto my third. I have some rewriting to do, but so far so good. I'll let you all know if I need to delay posting the next couple weeks' worth of chapters.
To all who have read this (monstrously long) story: Thank you!! And now I'll stop rambling and post the chapter. :)
( Chapter Thirty-Six )
The boys discuss orcish-type things in this chapter, so if you're bothered by gruesome topics, please be forewarned and proceed carefully. Other than that, I think that they more or less behave in this chapter.
Per usual, all comments--good and bad--are welcome and appreciated. Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to give me comments and help with this story. I'm a bit amazed to be in chapter thirty-six already; it seems just yesterday, I was nervously posting chapter one. Yesterday, while working on editing the next week's worth of chapters, I moved from my second disk of material and onto my third. I have some rewriting to do, but so far so good. I'll let you all know if I need to delay posting the next couple weeks' worth of chapters.
To all who have read this (monstrously long) story: Thank you!! And now I'll stop rambling and post the chapter. :)
( Chapter Thirty-Six )
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