Your Caranthir is one seriously scary child, but he's adorable all the same. Is he refering to the language of the Valar or one of the elvish languages as foreign?
I like the idea of Feanor and family going off to Formenos every summer, and also that Nerdanel threatens not to go if Feanor doesn't do what she wants. It's a nice piece of foreshadowing.
Do you have a particular reason for using the sindarin words for mother and father? I've wondered why so many fic writers do, but never got round to asking before.
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Date: 2005-07-18 04:21 pm (UTC)I like the idea of Feanor and family going off to Formenos every summer, and also that Nerdanel threatens not to go if Feanor doesn't do what she wants. It's a nice piece of foreshadowing.
Do you have a particular reason for using the sindarin words for mother and father? I've wondered why so many fic writers do, but never got round to asking before.