They both look good to me...but I'm so terrible with languages that I don't trust my judgement on that. I generally cheat for my names and use claudi007's Elf Fetish Name Generator (which appears to be in the process of moving at the moment).
Isn't myrsine on your flist? She's quite the pro when it comes to Elvish languages!
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rosecarmine
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Date: 2006-02-10 01:14 am (UTC)Isn't
Sorry I can't be of more help than that.... :^/