I've just realized I haven't commented until now, and actually I should be doing something entirely different right now.
*likes chapter*
And like some others before, I have to add I almost like your Indis. She may be a more passive character, but you make her appear as if there was a quiet strength hidden in her. Which she certainly need, since there always seem to be Miriel's shoes to fill and her shadow hovering above.
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Date: 2006-02-15 10:18 am (UTC)*likes chapter*
And like some others before, I have to add I almost like your Indis. She may be a more passive character, but you make her appear as if there was a quiet strength hidden in her. Which she certainly need, since there always seem to be Miriel's shoes to fill and her shadow hovering above.