Still, there's something about fresh writing that just feels so...uncertain. To me anyway.
re-writing does that to you, especially when you have to write complete new chapters because all of sudden... the re-writes demands it.
Maitimo is getting weary of his family, and I like your notion of "outgrowing" them.
Well I think that wole bathscene, that pretty much says it all, it feels like he is raising his brothers together with his parents. Is it justified? Will this be the reason why he always feels too tied to his home? Will it be Maglor who will be the first to leave? I somehow can see this happening... *muses a bit on*
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Date: 2006-02-16 04:56 pm (UTC)re-writing does that to you, especially when you have to write complete new chapters because all of sudden... the re-writes demands it.
Maitimo is getting weary of his family, and I like your notion of "outgrowing" them.
Well I think that wole bathscene, that pretty much says it all, it feels like he is raising his brothers together with his parents. Is it justified? Will this be the reason why he always feels too tied to his home? Will it be Maglor who will be the first to leave? I somehow can see this happening... *muses a bit on*