I think here we are with the AMC-feeling again. As I said, I don't think last week's chapter was bad, but it's somehow been lacking that certain feeling I can't place.
Macalaure and Vingarie are so cute together (Ha! I haven't been using that word for faaaar to long...). It must be kind of hard for Nelyo to watch this.
Perhaps I should wander, as do the great bards of lore, with nothing but my harp and the clothes upon my body, singing hymns to the sea.
Oops. Don't say things like that.
I imagine the house again, but I have trouble imagining a daughter there or any children at all, just Vingarië and me and the sound of the sea.
And don't say anything like that either. (Though my little inner lover of tragedy tells me she adores that paragraph...)
Wonderful chapter. And I think I like Vingarie's father a lot.
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Date: 2006-03-19 08:43 pm (UTC)Macalaure and Vingarie are so cute together (Ha! I haven't been using that word for faaaar to long...). It must be kind of hard for Nelyo to watch this.
Perhaps I should wander, as do the great bards of lore, with nothing but my harp and the clothes upon my body, singing hymns to the sea.
Oops. Don't say things like that.
I imagine the house again, but I have trouble imagining a daughter there or any children at all, just Vingarië and me and the sound of the sea.
And don't say anything like that either. (Though my little inner lover of tragedy tells me she adores that paragraph...)
Wonderful chapter. And I think I like Vingarie's father a lot.